In mid-August, I wrote a post here on Active Rain entitled "How Do You Write Your Agent Bio? Put Your Best Foot Forward & Write Something Unique (Lose the Boilerplate!)" My Rule # 1 was this: When you write your agent bio or promo pieces, find your own way of expressing why you have strengths that should be factored in favorably.
I'd like to go back to the "how to write an agent bio" topic and expand on it a little more. Once we're past the copy & paste mentality, what next? Along those lines, but more focused, I would add "be specific - be very specific". Here are some examples of places you can and should be specific:
First, be specific with your location - don't say that you work the entire east coast. Where do you work? Where do you want to work? Being specific will help you a number of ways, both in terms of prospective clients identifying you as an area expert, but also Google finding you.
Second, be specific with your real estate background (whether it's what type of construction you've sold, what your education or honors or experience is generally). Buyers and sellers aren't moved by fluff comments about how great you are. Be detailed.
Third, be personal enough to name some specific elements that matter in your life or history - again with facts - that consumers viewing your profile get a sense of who you are not just as a real estate professional, but also as a person.
In all of these cases, the information you provide will give potential clients a way of seeing you as distinct from every other professional they're interviewing.
I found a profile of an Active Rainer that I think does these things very well. His name is Michael Mahoney, and his profile URL even has his market territory worked into it, which really impressed me:
http://activerain.com/mmahoeny_boston From his profile, you can see not only where he works, but also where he grew up (locally in West Roxbury - where my brother happens to live with his family), that he's done military service, been involved in his local Board of Realtors, that he's won awards, and that his clients are apparently very happy. And look at how many local "place" names find their way into his profile - very impressive!
Michael has done a great job of introducing himself to his readers on his Active Rain profile. I strongly suggest that Active Rain members study what he's done - there are great ideas on his profile that we can all emulate (myself included). My profile can be seen at http://activerain.com/popehandy. I intend to improve my profile with some of the ideas I've gleaned while persuing the study of being specific in our bios.
To recap, Rule # 2 for your real estate bio: be specific so that prospective clients (and Google) can find you and identify you as someone knowledgeable and connected to their area and needs.